Every June, another thousand or so economists receive their PhDs
and go out into the world, there to impinge upon our consciousness
to one degree or another, employing the measuring rod of money
to learn things about the world that we have built.
But first, of course, they must learn to impinge on one anothers'
consciousnesses.
It's astonishing how little is generally understood about what
technical economists do among themselves. I don't mean that very
interesting class of men and women who are using their know-how
to make money. Nor do I mean those evangelists and reformers who
are seeking, one way or another, to improve the world.
I mean those economists who are involved in the actual production
and distribution of knowledge. I've been thinking about this because
I have been reading a book on tradecraft directed at professional
researchers.
A
Guide for the Young Economist: Writing and Speaking Effectively
about Economics by William Thomson is a kind of Strunk
and White for those who still must write at least a little
in the natural language of their choice, a Halmos (How
to Write Mathematics) for the mathematically-inclined, with
a little bit of Edward Tufte (The
Visual Display of Quantitative Information) thrown in.
Thomson is a professor at the University of Rochester. He is
a theorist and editor of a journal. He writes with force and unassuming
grace -- "the quintessence of the French mind as it should
be," says his friend Maurice Salles of the University of
Caen, "precision, concision elegance -- Pascal rather than
Derrida."
His guide is concerned mainly with describing and manipulating
formal models, not with writing up empirical work. It consists
of three little essays about the activities that occupy most of
the working hours of a research economist: Writing Papers, Giving
Talks and Writing Referee Reports.
Much of Thomson's advice is familiar to anyone who writes for
a living; who writes, that is, with a view to contributing to
a consensus. Write so that you will not have to be read. Don't
forget how you made your discoveries. Don't forget your errors.
Demonstrate the originality and significance of your contribution.
Understand the function of each component of your paper. In the
literature review, tell a story -- don't enumerate.
Much is unfamiliar, at least to those of us who don't write
a lot of algebra in the course of a day: Choose easily recognizable
notation. Learn a good scientific typesetting software. Choose
mnemonic abbreviations for assumptions and properties. Give examples
illustrating novel definitions. Avoid unnecessary technical jargon.
Choose the right mixture of words and mathematics in proofs. Don't
leave (too many) steps to the reader. Explore all possible variants
of your results.
All these sections (and many more) are illuminated by examples,
illustrated by occasional cartoons, spiced by many fine small
jokes. The result is a glimpse over the shoulder of a master.
"Of course you are rightly proud of the sophisticated reasoning
that has led you to your findings. Nevertheless work hard to make
them look simple."
What's the difference between a paper and a talk? "Oral
presentations are more conducive than papers to discussing the
paths not taken, the reasons why, and the lessons you drew from
failures. The possibility of talking a little about the personal
history of your work, recounting how your thinking evolved over
time and how your results gained in generality, is one of the
benefits of a talk over a paper."
Indeed, he writes, "Describing your research to another
person often brings out some previously unnoticed difficulty or
that elusive piece that solves a puzzle. It works even when your
listener knows little about your field and, even, remains silent.
You feel like a fool for bothering your friend. Don't worry. Just
keep doing it (and return the favor). It happens to everybody.
Ideally, of course, it shouldn't happen in a seminar, which is
why you need to practice with your friends first."
And what's a referee report, anyway? The referee's task is to
assess the value of a paper submitted to a journal, as an expert
consulted by the associate editor with responsibility for a particular
part of the field. He is protected by a promise of anonymity,
even though in many cases the promise may be little more than
a polite convention. (Communities of experts in many fields are
quite small.)
Yet the authority of any science rests squarely on the shoulders
of its referees, for any article published by a reputable journal
represents not just the opinion of its author, but the collective
judgment of the editor and his team of advisors (at least) that
its contents are clear and credible and that its indebtedness
to previous work has been adequately acknowledged.
It is this quasi-judicial system of collective responsibility
for consensus, disciplined by the possibility of experiment and
other forms of empirical investigation, into which an elaborate
system of checks and balances has been built over the years, that
permits scientists to utter those strange and amazingly powerful
words -- "the profession thinks
."
"You may have been asked by your adviser or another faculty
member in your department to referee a paper for a journal,"
writes Thomson. "It is not, however, a skill taught in any
of the classes you took." Your two main goals, he says, must
be "to assess the manuscript's suitability for publication
and advise the author about improving his or her work." The
author, of course, will see your report.
"Keep in mind
" counsels Thomson, "that
complete anonymity is impossible anyway and that one of the first
things some authors try to do when receiving a report is to figure
out who wrote it. It is something that you just have to accept."
And there is always the cover letter, which will not be passed
along, in which you can raise more delicate issues, including
-- a not-infrequent source of tension -- the relationship of the
manuscript under review to your own work.
Refereeing only appears to be an unrewarding activity, Thomson
writes. It is true that "essentially only one person, the
associate editor, knows who produced this thoughtful report."
But by repeatedly doing a good job, "you are helping your
reputation; editors talk to each other and to other members of
the profession.
"The quality of refereeing is often mentioned in recommendation
letters written on behalf of young researchers. Your work will
eventually earn you a spot on a board of editors, giving you more
of a chance to make your opinion count."
"If you follow all of the above recommendations,"
Thomson concludes, in the pleasant manner that distinguishes professors
from the many other authorities, such as sports coaches and military
drill instructors, who are involved in training ofessionals, "you
will be pleased with yourself, your seminar audiences will be
enlightened, your classmates will be impressed, your parents will
be proud, and you will land a job in a top-five department. But
most importantly -- and here, I speak as an adviser -- your adviser
will be happy with you."
Thomson is perhaps a little less forthcoming than I would have
preferred on the role that mathematics plays in helping theorists
think, write and speak clearly. But then in this book he is preaching
to the choir. It is the rest of us who could do with some additional
instruction in what economists do and how they do it.